Sakura continues on her adventure, testing out her newfound ability to consume people whole. She pays a visit to Makoto, where she tricks her into being her next prey. Wasn't exactly sure if I wanted to continue this, even if I left the last one off hinting towards a sequel. I might focus more on this, or take a break and do another one-off or something. First story with disposal though, didn't want to write it in at first, MBucket - 2 hours ago Hey, thanks for the comment. I know my reply is late, but I'm a night person.
Anyway, my excuse to justify her actions is that her hunger is "corrupting" her per say. She's slowly starting to care more about eating, and caring less about putting up a fair fight. Also, there's a little bit extra that wouldn't make any sense from the source material.
Sakura doesn't particularly know Makoto that much, unless if Dan or Elena introduced them to each other out of game.
I also described Ibuki as Sakura's rival in the previous installment. This however never comes up in the games I believe, and in fact, only Karen is ever described as being Sakura's rival. Anyway, writing the next part of this series right now, so hope to see what you think when I'm finished. Bright - 9 hours ago I like how she has an inner monologue about justifying eating her friend.
Also good description on the eating scene. Nugget - 10 hours ago Pretty cool to see more Sakura as pred. If I had any issues with it I would say it seems out of character for Sakura to want an easy fight. Maybe she should beat Makoto fair and square rather than tricking her. But also qririntva fight scene before the vore could bog down the pace. But overall great story MBucket - 1 day ago Okay Can you perhaps tell me which part you enjoyed the most?
If there was a part you didn't really care for, I'd love to hear about that too. Bright - 1 day ago.